YOUR ARMS AROUND ME FELT SO GOOD…THE UGLY BARRACKS DISAPPEARED – THERE WAS NO HUNGER… AND NO FEAR.
O WHAT A SIGHT, JUST YOU AND I,
MY LOVELY FATHER (ONCE BIG AND STRONG). And last but not least THERE ARE NO TOOLS TO MEASURE LOVE AND ONLY FOOLS WOULD FAIL TO SCALE
YOUR VICTORY. I dont have a father by my side.... So ill use my mom as an example. That moment when i gained independence in badminton, what i mean by that is i usually cry if i lose a match when i was small, but after that i learned how to accept loss, so usually my mom would pretend to lose in oder for me to win, but this time i told her to play the best she could, i played with my mom for the first time with her actual strength, she made me go back and fourth, and in the end i lost, but now i can beat her but i thank her for teaching me to accept losing and moving on with my life, but i didn't give up yet i trained so hard so that i can be the "best" and now i have many rival to face and beat! This connects me to the poem because it shows the bond between me and my mom having fun, just like sonia and her father.
This is a good blog post. Even though you have a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, you have a good message. I like how you gave an example from the poem. I also liked how you connected the bond between you and your mother to Sonia and her father. Next time, you should improve on spelling and grammar, especially capitalization.
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